Fullmetal Abridged
Kurai_Xavier for Edward Elric
In the original: Edward is a sort-of cocky teen who made a grave mistake when he was younger and searches for a way to fix it. He cares deeply about doing the right thing, and helping people, the greatest of which is his brother, Alphonse.
In ours: Edward is an arrogant prodigy that believes in science above everything. The only things he cares about are his brother, and getting his leg back. Everything else is expendable. He's very blunt and doesn't have time for emotions.
"I am a prodigy! No one can Alchematize like I do!"
"Oh that's cute. You have an imaginary friend."
"I have a plan. I always have a plan."
Very good try. :) Next time try not not let it clip so much. Typically less is more with gain.
What they said, Gain is important to keep an eye on. Keep it low for loud recordings, and high for quiet ones!