Fullmetal Abridged
SlashleyVO for Fuhrer King Bradley
In the original: The stern leader of the military, he has a nearly grandfather-like attitude towards everything. His good-natured fascade, however, clearly covers up something darker.
In ours: We plan on playing up the dual nature of the character by having him be incredibly jolly and happy one minute and then uncomfortably serious the next, as if comically bipolar.
"Oh yes boys, ha. Good show. I used to have fun and games as well."
"Damn Mustang, ha ha, that was cold! Like the blade of a saber slowly sliding into a chest cavity."
"We have fun here. But then we work. But then we have fun again."
Do you think you can do this in a deeper tone? Bradley is not only a War veteran, but also the Fuhrer. I like how you changed the tone as you read. Keep that. :) Well done!