Twin Dragons Comic Dub [Wave 2]
mindlezzgamer for Benji O'Connell West [Support]
Benji is a dog hybrid and the adopted son of Josh West and Victor O’Connel. His real surname is unknown as he was put at the doorstep of an orphanage when he was a couple months old with no trace of his real parents. When Josh and Victor adopted Benji, they gave him both their surnames.
Easy-going, laid-back and always up for having some fun with friends. He’s Kai’s best friend and hangs out with him a lot since Kai moved into the city. He looks out for his friends and makes sure they don’t get into trouble. Benji tends to avoid confrontation if possible.
He is 14 years old, turns 15 as the webtoon progresses.
- english
- male teen
- 14 years old
- 14
- all english accents
- male child
[Benji's new neighbors, Kia and Kaya has started talking to you very energetically. You are the first hybrid they have seen other then themselves] (Slightly taken aback but speaks nonchalantly) So im the first hybrid you have met? You must have lived in a pretty small town then. Hybrids are everywhere here.
[Benji is playing videogames with Kia and Kaya. They talk about parents where he reveals he was adopted and wonders what it would be like having a mom] (Calm but focused, he is trying to not lose a game to Kia and Kaya) I do wonder what it's like to have a mom sometimes [Kaya: What happened to your real parents?] (calm but gets frustrated near the end) I never knew my real parents. I was given up at birth. Probably because they couldn't take care of me. Or maybe... Because they didn't want a dog-eared kid like me.
[Benji and his new friends are taking the public bus to get to school Kaya is about to press the emergency stop button] (panicked) WAIT! Don't press those!
Hello, and thank you for your audition! My feedback are as follows...Very well done! I would say this was pretty good! On every take when saying "I was given up at birth." you ended the inflection of "birth" going up. When doing so it makes the statement sound like a question. I really enjoyed your second take for the first sentence. When you reached the rest of the line it sounded like your voice was whinnying. That can be due to going to high in that register. I definitely recommend to try and master the pitch and play keep away for those areas as it could hurt you in the long run!
Ya that second set of lines like I could picture in my head but I couldn't get that voice out. I strained a bit on the higher end then I wanted but thanks so much for the feedback