The Crawl (Halo 5 Machinima) -|Original Sci Fi Fantasy|-
Project Overview
DISCLAIMER - READ THE UPDATES FOR USEFUL INFO.
This project is in it's early stages, that's including the script. So before auditioning, please be aware that there is a possibility that this project may never be finished. And if it does get finished, it probably won't be for a while. The audition page is also subject to page as I make adjustments and improvements.
EDIT: To draw more attention, this is now a paid project. The script for this show will not be sent out until I am sure the show will see the light of day. Payment will be received upon completion of the character's lines in the script if you are casted. Via paypal.
A trailer will be released shortly.
IF YOU AUDITION, DO IT FOR FUN. BUT STILL TRY!
DO NOT ADD EFFECTS TO YOUR LINES. I take every decent audition into editing to see what they sound like with the effects I will be applying. I can't do that if you add your own effects. I will disregard ANY audition if it has post processing effects.
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It’s chaos for a group of Alliance Rangers when they are tasked with recovering a missing shipment of supplies in the harsh deserts of Loken, an independent colony world that thrives on crime and corruption.
They call these deserts The Crawl. Stretching for hundreds of miles around the perimeter of the Oasis, an atmospheric generator that lies at the center of the colony.
The Crawl is a brutal and unforgiving place where everything but the air is a threat. A strong will and a stern fist is required for survival, and for these Rangers, their own survival is just the beginning of their problems when they stumble upon new information, discovering just how dire the stakes are.
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HELLO EVERYBODY!!! --- The activity on this project has actually been overwhelming. 200+ auditions? I never expected I'd hit 50 so I'm grateful for the effort from everyone whether they get the part or not. --- Congratulations to: - taikunoaku for winning the part as Han Tavorr. - Vicmanuel2 for winning the part as Rick Scott. - RubyK for winning the part as Mia Coe. --- If anyone auditioned for these characters but never got the part, I encourage you to try out for another. You never know, you could be a perfect fit. In this update I'm going to be adressing some changes to the audition page and clarifying how Droid and Varkon characters should sound, because I wasn't nearly clear enough on those facts. Carson is now Karsen (He's been changed to a Varkon character due to a script change), --- LINE CHANGES: I have revised a lot of the lines for this project, as mentioned in the original description the project was in early development and I believe the line I have now for the characters are a lot better at conveying what they think and feel when they're speaking. The originaly lines, upon hearing someone else speak them it became clear to me that they don't flow the best when you take voice and accent into account, so the lines are generally improved and have more context, and I'm hoping that makes them easier to work with. So if you auditioned previously, please give it another go. --- DROID CHARACTERS: Droids are characters that I find most interesting. They are machines that have a hint of sentience but at the safety of the organic users, their sentience is limited. They are given a purpose and that purpose is all they care about. Every now and again, a personality creeps through but their programming stops it from growing. It's cruel, some characters in the story don't agree with it, but it's a fact that's eluded to in the story but not really explored. It's not an element that's important to 'The Crawl', but it will have focus in other stories set in the Soldur universe. Their voice is dependent on their purpose. E.g, one for military is supposed to be assertive, they can bark orders and information fluently, but they're short and blunt when it comes to simply speaking. Similarly, a security Droid needs to have that assertive tone, but more tame. They're not supposed to imtimidate until something becomes a threat. While a service droid has a gentle and comforting voice and talk just like us. --- VARKON CHARACTERS: Varkon are a species civilized reptilians that originate from a scorching hot, desert like planet much like the one The Crawl is set on. They are tall, lean and covered in scale like plates, gained from their evolution on their harsh planet. Their males are electrokinetic and their females are psionic. They also age slower, living to an average age of 160. Despite their imposing nature, they are quite similar to humanity in terms of their civil traits, which is why they were able to form an alliance with them so easily, their culture is akin to medival humans but not so... Savage. As mentioned before, their size and voice are rather imposing to humans. Deeper than usual and have a lot of grit to them. The side effect when you add their incessant need to perfectly pronounce every word in their language or ours ends up making a lot of their dialogue come off as blunt and condescending. It's not intentional, and some Varkon characters even make a consious effort to sound friendlier towards strangers (Such as Nali) while others just maintain their tough exterior no matter the recipient (Like Han, Kish or Kovar). --- Well that rounds up the update! I'd like to say thanks again for the interest, and since the auditions deadline has been pushed back another month, I'd love to see some re auditions from you guys and gals. - Sir Hypeth
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Update 1
I've had more auditions than I expected, and while most of them are quite good in terms of acting ability and quality, I feel the character personalities were not quite a hit due to poor communication on my part. Each character that has received a lot of auditions has been addressed in an edit just below the original description of each character, hopefully it makes the personality and traits easier to put across in your audition, if you would like to audition again, feel free! - Realistic delivery (I'm treating this as if it were a live action production. Please note that their description is only a guideline for their traits and attitude. And until a situation comes up that exposes those traits, they just act like regular people. To clarify, a decent microphone quality is required as I'm trying to keep a level of consistency in terms of audio quality. - Less background noise (Try moving the mic away from noise or putting something insulating between you and it. Holding a blanket around you also helps so long as you don't touch the mic with it.) - Microphone discipline (Mic popping, breathing into microphone, moving while recording lines etc. To get around popping without a pop filter, try not speaking directly into the microphone, turn it at a 45 degree angle and talk past it so it picks up sound, but not the air.) Thank you again for auditioning! I hope you'll give the characters another try at some point.
*Talking about a group of bandits that live in the desert*
Nali: Maybe... I just leave them to it, keep to myself. Easier that way. They know not to come here, so they can have their canyon. No concern of mine.
Nali: What are you doing out here anyway?
Rick: Something wrong?
Nali: No... Sort of. Don't see Humans out here much. Too hot. You're Alliance too... No common reason to be out here so if you are... It must be something interesting. I see three well armed Rangers in front of me.
Kish: Will it be a problem?
Nali: Not if you keep em cold.
Nali: HEY! What did I say about fighting?! If you wish to spill blood for something that happened over 60 years ago, then you're a lost cause. There's an entire desert outside that door, it stretches to the horizon and you can do whatever you want out there! In here, you respect the rules. Got it?
*Trying to reassure someone.*Rick: No one's gonna fight us. Not there. There's only one rule out here and breaking it's a death sentence. I doubt anyone's that stupid.Kish: You doubt a lot of things. The place with no rules has one rule and you expect a bunch of desperate criminals to follow it?Rick: Well, there's plenty of caves around here if you're that chicken shit. You can go and camp out in one of those and we'll let you know when we're ready to move. How's that sound?
*Talking about a "rival" figure that's out here in the Crawl.*Rick: What is he doing out here? Any volunteers?Kish: For what?Rick: For asking him.Kish: *Sharply* It's none of our business, why would you do that?Rick: Don't you fucking talk to me like that. If it's not our business you've got no reason to get all pissy about em. Now shut up.Kish: Hmph.Mia: If he's here, it must be for something big... Might be our business...Rick: No, we're not getting caught up in some RCS crap. We've got enough to worry about as it is.
*After he nearly gets into an unwinnable fight because of Kish, he loses his cool.*
Rick: Oh you don't know?! You don't know! Mia, you know right!? Tell him why they call him the stoneskin.
Mia: Mutation caused his scales to be incredibly resistant to signs of stress. Even to the point of being bulletproof.
Rick: BULLETPROOF KISH! BULLET - PROOF! He would have ripped my damn head off! All because of you you bitter piece of sh*t! And you have the cheek to call them savages!
Kish: They are savages!
Rick: I swear to god I'm gonna kill you!-
Mia: Will the two of you shut the hell up?!
Caleb: I'm telling ya. Took the fuckin car and everything.Han: He wouldn't have lasted the day where I grew up.Caleb: I grew up where you grew up.Han: Not in my time. Would have strung him up and gutted him for that. Murder, theft, vandalism... Unacceptable. Punishable by death.Caleb: Have to be that gruesome though?Han: Maybe not. Depended on who caught them, really.
Han: I thought you'd show more anger, considering they shot you.
Rick: We only shot each other because you opened fire. They were giving us option.
Han: And what were these options? Leave or die? They don't seem like good options. And we've not the time for anything else.
Rick: I thought we were negotiating!
Han: Couldn't take the risk. Whoever those people were, these Jackals thought you were the culprits and they... Attacked. We never did most of the damage.
*Talking about the Jackals*Han: I'm an ambassador. It's my job to find another way. Believe it or not, the Jackals have families too. Sure. we could just attack them but should any escape? If they found out I slaughtered mothers and fathers chasing supplies... Everything your Alliance and my people have achieved? It will mean nothing. And they'll have my head.Kish: That's not our problem-Han: They'll have yours too. Believe it or not, this place has does have rules. We're on their territory. So was the cargo. They had the right. I don't like it, but that's the truth. And that's why we negotiate. That's why we don't just burn their canyon to ash.
Rick: How many cars are outside?Mia: I can only see one round the back. Light build. Probably the Keepers.Rick: How do you know that?Mia: I don't. Just saying, no one in their right mind is gonna drive a light vehicle out here. So it could belong to the keeper. Keepers don't really need to worry about being attacked with the security they've got. Speed makes more sense.Rick: Right. Either way, look's like our guys are running late.Mia: Couldn't figure that out on my own, glad you're here to be such a help.
Rick: Ah. We can't just leave the car out there. We'll have to push it.Nali: Through the sand? You're crazy.Mia: Well neither of us have fuel so it's worth a try. If we leave it out there bandits'll tear it down for parts.Nali: I might be able to help with that.Mia: Magic fuel?Nali: Almost.
*Interrupting an argument*Mia: Will the two of you shut up?! There's nothing we can do about it now, At least we're alive. Sitting there screaming each other, giving me a headache isn't going to solve anything.
Caleb: Just knocked the guy out, hopped in his jeep and took off with a case full of weapons. Found out afterwards he broke the poor bastards jaw.Han: You're lying.Caleb: (Nonchalant) I'm not, guy's got a mean right hook apparently. I was bloody amazed at the time. The rest of the Varkon were calling the poor sap glassjaw all the way until I left.Han: And they just the attacker run? He would have been strung up and gutted for that where I grew up.Caleb: I grew up where you grew up. That's a bit extreme.Han: You didn't grow up in my time, life wasn't so easy back then. People held on tighter to that sort of thing. Anyone who threatened that...Caleb: Hung him by his entrails... Right... Glad things changed.
Han: My superiors ordered me to get one for security reasons. So I got one that's good at killing without trying to psychoanalyse me.Nali: Fair enough.Caleb: He's just mad cause every Droid he talks to tries to console him.Han: He's not wrong. The last one I spoke to asked me if I was feeling delirious, or lost. I was just looking for someone.Caleb: That's probably cause you're ancient.Han: Don't push your luck.
*In the middle of a gunfight*Caleb: Stay in cover, you've got people all around you!Rick: No shit sherlock!Caleb: Wait for my mark, then move to those rocks on your left, got it?!
Kish: If you think that's how I sound then you've been drinking too much of that colourful grak in r&r.
Mia: You mean cocktails?
Kish: Whatever you call it, changes nothing.
Mia: Not our fault you don't know what you sound like.
Kish: You won't know what anything sounds like if you-
Rick: Kish, shut up-
Kish: (Not shouting, just annoyed) No, no. I won't shut up. This is stupid. Nowhere in this assignment was the plan to go and sit in a Sanctuary in the middle of the Crawl, and wait for reinforcements to show up. Any number of things could have happened to them out here, you know that just as I do.
Rick: It's in Varkon. What does it say?Kish: It's in Vraxi. Not Varkon. You don't speak "Human" do you?Rick: Alright whatever, my bad.Kish: Can't you read it?Rick: I can understand it when it's spoken., never bothered learning the text.Kish: Uncultured swine.
*It's the first time he's opened up about his grudge to pretty much anyone. It's half apology, half asking for understanding. He's not crying or anything, but it's emotional and heartfelt.*Kish: From the moment he stepped foot into that Sanctuary... I've been lost... I don't know if I'm angry or afraid i just want them dead. I see that uniform and I just see the weapons that killed my family, I hear their screams clawing at the back of my head I see my uncle hanging from the ceiling by his neck... I wish I could forget, But I can't and all people ever tell me is "get over it".*There's a pause*Rick: You know we're here for you, right? You don't need to just sit there all the time thinking about it we can... Talk. We can talk about it. I don't know if it's what you need or want, but... You need to do something Kish. You can't go on like that.Kish: I know.Rick: Take some leave when we get home. It'll give you time to think without command ramming co-op stuff down your neck.Kish: There's nothing for me outside of thi-Mia: *Broadly trying to lighten the mood* Come with me, try some cocktails. You might like em. Who know's. Drink enough and you won't even be able to think about standing.Kish: Drowning my problems in alcohol... Hm. Maybe.
Our people are strong because we have to be. We adapted. Those who couldn't were taken by the Crawl. I bet you never took a moment to consider how many of your marked "criminals" were people born into it, the city thrived on that lifestyle for decades then we were given an ultimatum we couldn't adhere to and for that, we were sent out here to die.
You're damn right I blame you! If The alliance had never stuck their nose where it didn't belong, we wouldn't be stuck out here in the first place! It wasn't you getting pushed out of the city during the Exodus! It wasn't you and everyone you care about bleeding in the sand, it was us! Our mothers and our fathers! (Calming down) Some of us too... The Alliance doesn't care about us... Kazi doesn't care about us... They forced our hand, now we'll force theirs... They'll get what they deserve for this.
*Combat dialogue, loud and assertive*NO! GET TO COVER!ON THE RIDGE! LIGHT THAT BASTARD UP!YOU'LL DIE FOR THIS GOLDIE!
Rick: God damn it we have orders!Kovar: I don't. I just have my people to take care of. We're clawing to survive as it is. I don't want you, or your weapons anywhere near my home. There are families, children. That might not mean anything to you, but it means everything to me. So turn around, (Pauses as she notices something in the distance) and... *A vehicle sits in the distance ominously*Kovar: Who is that? You said you were alone(!)Rick: Who? That's... They're not ours.Kovar: You're lying!Rick: Do I look like I'm lying?!Kovar: Well they're not with us!
Han: Tell me your name.Kovar: (Grim, in pain) I'll tell you nothing Feron! End it or leave me you're wasting your time.Han: I tried to help you. It was your people who shot first.Kovar: (Grim, In pain) How couldn't they? Have you forgotten who you are, Stoneblade? I gave the order.Han: I am not your enemy.Kovar: (Grim, In pain) Surrounded by my dead friends while you stand lying to me, I feel different.
*Interrupting a conversation*Kovar: If you're going to stand there and talk, get off me!Han: Why would I do that?Kovar: Look at me. I'm not going anywhere... Crushing me under your foot changes nothing.*There's a pause before he steps off of her.*Kovar: *Begrudgingly* Thank you.Rick: You're not off the hook yet.Kovar: Me? What about you?! What do you think our leaders will do when they find out who did this?! You'll burn for it!
SAM: Yes sir?SAM: Unable to verify.SAM: Humor was deemed unecessary by my command operator. This is a combat platform, it is thought that the imitation of organic mannerisms results in a loss of focus on important tasks that require the attention of my operator or their allies.
SAM: There may be hostiles remaining. Four confirmed kills, 5 unspecified. Use caution. The second group is out of range.SAM: Understood sir.SAM: One hostile remaining. Awaiting orders sir.
SAM: Move to my position Rangers, I'll provide covering fire!SAM: Stay down, we'll handle this!
Roland is a military droid. But Rolands model is a lot more unique and powerful. Designed for full blown war, this prototype frame is described as 'Tiger', named after the German WW2 Tank. Able to shrug off most forms of damage and dish out an onslaught of artillery and weapons fire.
Nali: Yep. Outta fuel. Go grab a can from downstairs.ROLAND: We have none left.Nali: What? Since when?ROLAND: Valkyrie used the last of it for this month's supply run.
ROLAND: The history between your factions indicates tensions may be high. I require confirmation that you will not instigate a fight, or I will be required to take action, resulting in the unfortunate deaths of you and your allies.Rick: We won't start anything.ROLAND: Acknowledged. Enjoy your stay.
ROLAND: It is unwise to make assumtions about individuals you do not knowNali: But I do know Han.ROLAND: I was speaking of the Rangers.Nali: I have faith they'll follow the rules.ROLAND: Faith is the concept of believing without relevant information to justify it. My programming is to keep you safe and I believe your logic to be flawed, and a danger to your life.
Kill that son of a bitch!
I see him, he's up there on the ridge!
*Varying death noises and shouts*