You have an adorable voice, my friend! It's got this kind of nice warmth with it that I feel suits Finnian really well, and it's really pleasant to hear! Fin, throughout the story, is a very kind and compassionate character, though she does have her own hardships in realizing that not everything can be fixed by being kind or passive. You have a tone that really suits the nicer side, but I feel with a bit of pushing, you can really hit that range of emotions that Fin progresses through within the story. There's a sense of urgency within the second line that can be hit with the right kind of vocal qualities in it -- quivering voices, panting -- and the stress and panic of her voice ultimately leads to that key impacting line where she summons Leviathan. You're calling to them, demanding them to save you, so say it loud because if you don't, you're gonna die! That's kind of the vibe I get with the second line that I'm looking for there. The third line was good too, but there's more of a defiance in her tone than a hesitation. It's a dialogue between the big bad guy, and this is Fin's first time really standing up for herself. I think if you showcase that with the right pauses in the place and perhaps a more adamancy in her overall tone, you can really nail it there! Fantastic work on your audition! Hopefully that little bit of feedback may help~