Starborn
Schnerder for Nicholas
Nicholas is pretty much the every-man of the group. Not that he's completely innocent, but he likes to lean more towards being away from trouble than being in it. He prefers playing his lute, singing and writing poetry than partaking in any robbing like his friends do. He's also pretty sensitive about his skills; he's prone to getting personally offended for remarks against it. But if he gets in a bind, he's also a skilled archer.
Nicholas' voice actually isn't that low. He has kind of a dorky personality, besides being an archer. Thus, we're looking for a kind of goofy, but at times can be serious voice.
I'm sick of getting a bounty in every single village we go to.
(like a Shakespearean actor) Such beautiful eyes. Oh how they sparkle, like pools of moondust cascading over a lake of wonder. And her hair, as it's black curls reach down to her shoulders. If only I could touch those lovely charcoal colored locks. (clear your throat) Excuse me, madam? But I... (stammer, akward mumbling, lasts for a few seconds) You know what, never mind... (defeated sigh)
(hum a little melody) Bad luck to end a song without finishing it.
Very good!
If there's anything you'd like me to improve, let me know and I can submit another attempt! Otherwise, thanks! Your comment is incredibly encouraging!
So far, you sound pretty good! If anything, I'd say watch out for going monotone on some lines. Like on the first one. But when you're directed to display a certain emotion, you're great!
Thanks for the feedback! I'll see what I can do!