[Webcomic Fandub] Out of Placers Recast
Pez Wolf for Elim Dorelga
Born to a family of tiplod ranchers, Elim enjoyed an idyllic, peaceful country life, which he would have happily continued if not for the invasion by the Sovereignty of Beletam and the subsequent draft. He was assigned to the same squad as Kassen, and deserted with him when things turned sour. They didn’t know each other very well before that, but became incredibly close as they kept each other alive during their desperate flight from their former home.
Pretty average male voice, I'm thinking something mid ranged with a hopeless yet optimistic outlook, he is the not very helpful but always at your side kind of guy.
(Confused but trying to be helpful) Uh... now that I think about it, I've never heard a yinglet say the "th" syllable. Maybe uh... try saying it their way? (P-15)
(Panicking and a bit worried) Kass! I heard a yinglet screaming and I'm pretty sure it was you even though I'm still getting used to your voice now but anyway, Are you okay!? (1-18)
(Matter of factly) Well if I can't make it better, I can at least promise to take my mace and pulp the face of anyone that makes fun of you. (1-52)
So there are a few things I would suggest for making your audition better. Firstly I would look into noise cancellation on whatever program you are using, the background buzzing is really hurting your quality. Second I like the less country accent better and I feel with some direction on inflection has the chance to be a solid audition. I wouldn't mind working with you on a more private chat to help you get a better audition if you are serious about this role.