The Purgatorians 'Prequel before the sequel' miniseries
Carson norling for Trevor Longstrom
Trevor is a friendly and polite young man who fears Elena. He works on the farm and is a hard worker.
Age range – 21-26
Accents allowed – British, Welsh, Irish, American, Australian.
Trevor needs to be able to portray friendliness and nervousness mixed with fear
Line 1 - Elena is talking to them and Billy calls her by her first name. Trevor knows the council are strict and can be dangerous so this worries him about possible repercussions.
Line 2 - Farm work can be tedious and repetitive. The boredom in Trevor's voice reflects this.
Line 3 - Trevor is defending himself against Billy's mocking in a friendly manner. Just imagine a friend has mocked you in friendly banter and how your reply would come across. Don't come across as angry, make it sound friendly.
- english
- male adult
- british
- ausrtralian
- nervousness
- friendly
- voice actor
- american
- welsh
- irish
- boredom
- 21-26
(shocked and a little scared) Billy! No, you can't call... You just called her Elena.
(Boredom) The same as everyday. Planting seeds and tending to the animals. Why do they need so many fields for so few people. We need more help here.
(Friendly, jokingly) I wasn't scared. I was cautious. There's a big difference. I'd like to keep my head on my shoulders, thank you very much.
There is still audio noise here though.
Line 1 - Take 1 was better. More natural with the panic.
Line 2 - Don't worry. I expect mistakes during auditions. Take 1 was better as the pauses in take two didn't seem that realistic to me.
Line 3 - This one didn't seem natural. The words would flow without the unneeded pauses. Also thank you very much didn't sound like a realistic way to say it. No need to elongate the words, just say it straight through. It tended to go a bit slow in both takes.
I can redo 3, do you want me to redo the others? I at least thought the noise was better than before.
Oh yes, it was a bit better. i just went in to listen after reading what you wrote and assumed it had been cleared :P
The problem is the audio right now. I listened through your submissions, and although nowhere near as bad, you can still hear it behind your voice. It really does need clearing otherwise either balancing will take much longer than needed to clean the file or retakes would keep being asked for.