Reality Check
Dexter Kraemer for Dai (Main Character Friend)
Information: A gentle giant with a caring heart. He is the strongest of the group, although he does have a weak spot: his heart. He loves working out and being the strongest he can be, both in endurance and in physical strength. While mostly calm, he can be enraged when his friends are in danger. He is soft-spoken, but when he does speak, his voice commands attention.
Fun Fact: He secretly writes romance novels in his free time!
Class: Tank
Voice: Deep, booming voice
Expectations: Combat Noises, Regular Speech, Yelling
- male young adult
(You are standing around while someone attacks you. Its almost funny how little damage they can do to you.)It looks like you can't even put a scratch on me. If you can handle my attacks... you won't be able to handle theirs.
(Remember, your weak spot is your heart. Your friend went a little bit too far and was a bit too mean. Now you are communicating what you need to make up.) *emotional* I just... I can't deal with what you said about me. I know it was a joke but... I need an apology, please.
(Your friend got scammed out of a rare item while you were offline. Show them what happens when someone tries to hurt your friends!!) You think you can fuck with my friends and get away with it? *sinister laugh* I'll show you what happens when you mess with me!
Thank you for your submission! Are you able to get more emotion into the second line?
Of course! What type of emotion are we looking for? Sad, hurt, soft, etc?
Like the comment hurt your feelings, but you are embarrassed to be able to be hurt by a joke when you are a tank.
Thanks for the guidance! I've submitted a second audition with these changes!