Beserkers (working title) animated story book visual novel
Andr3e for Gunnar
Gunnar is our main character he is the son of a chief of violent mountain men. Amongst all of them, he is considered the weakest link. He is compassionate, thoughtful, and caring. And has a special love for animals. His father and community look down on him because of this. They see him as inferior weak and defective because of his most of his teenage years he grew up, enduring years of abuse at the hands of his father. He has multiple scars both mentally and physically. His voice is timid and quiet almost Monotone at times. He also stutters, especially in his father’s presence. I imagine his voice would sound like the fox from the little prince or Atreus from god of war, Ragnarok he is 17 years old so he should sound around that age. Any accents are welcome since this does take place in a fictional world bonus points if it’s a northern European accent
- english
- narration
- male teen
- male young adult
- northen english
- animation/character
- visualnovel
- british
- irish
- viking
- amateur voice acting
- emotional voice acting
it wasn’t until I looked at him, all the years of bloodshed, murder rape it was in him I could see it in his blood soaked eyes. I could see it in the curves of his shattered knotted up face. I could see it In way he hurt me without thought or hesitation. His heart was hollow and riven. Nothing would ever stop him, nothing would ever satisfy him. How could I’ve been so stupid he wasn’t my father, he was the devil himself.
What have I done?
*Grunting, sighing, screaming, crying noise etc
I would work on your pacing and spacing, this is feeling a bit rushed, like you are reading instead of speaking. Your voice is crisp, lean into that and speak about slower with a touch more inflection and you will have the starts of an excellent VA baseline....also you spoke in an American accent.....
Oh MY BAD I didn't notice the European accent thing haha. I'm from Australia so I just defaulted to whatever my voice does when I want to make it sound serious 🤣 I'm not the best with different accents.
About the rushing yea, I kinda was just reading it and not considering how fast or slow i should be talking but I appreciate the feedback on pacing and spacing I'll definitely work on it! (and the different types of accents but I assume that will take a long time 😅)