Collection of Consequences / Mellish Sweets ARG
Toby J Smith for Alby Blume
Alby is the main antagonist of this ARG. He is the curator of how Mellish came to be, destructive, and blamed it on Heather once he closed down the business. He is the cause behind the puzzle of Collection of Consequences. Before his true nature was revealed with Mellish Sweets, he was seen as an honest, best friend to Heather. He was funny, smart, and charming. He was well known in town, as for why so many people easily believed Alby when he blamed Heather for the destruction of Mellish Sweets.
Alby was born and raised in the rural part of Concord, New Hampshire in a low class dysfunctional family. Abuse wasn't moralized as his dad eventually killed his mom when he was a young teen. Despite what happened at home, Alby was indifferent to it and created a great reputation at school and downtown. He had many friends, but he was never afraid to enter his house. Because it didn't affect him. Alby was always abnormal, but nobody would have noticed that.
- english
- male young adult
- male adult
- english (american)
(to a News Reporter) All I can say is that I am astonished by what a show Heather put on while we were partners.
(to Heather) You've come so far, and yet you wish to throw it all away?
(to himself, creepily) I've...I've done it. (laughs) We will succeed!
I like your voice. Could you put the stakes higher in the acting? Especially for the first line, Alby is in shock and he's trying to get that emotion across clearly to the listener to get them to understand his sorrow from his partnership with Heather. And in the second line, he's trying to convince Heather to keep going, so he's going to speak in a more compassionate and considerate tone with a strict edge. And for the last one, he's all alone so he can act however he wants. He would most likely sound a bit like he's losing his mind, so some vocal fry at the end could work. Sorry this is a lot. I think you have potential!
Hi. Thanks so much for the feedback! I'd be happy to give you another take. I could get it to you by tomorrow pm.