Konosuba LN short
Eris Vox for Leisure Girl
less than 200 words [10 lines] + pivotal character - $15
The Leisure Girl is a monster in disguise that Kazuma and his party encounter. She is in the form a small child ~10-12y/o and speaks like a vulnerable sheltered child when speaking to people. When she drops her facade, she takes on a indignant, delinquent tone that could be much older. The scene revolves around her tricking the rest of the cast into thinking she is a helpless girl. no noticeable regionalism; speaks influent as if speaking English for the first time.
- english
- female child
Leisure Girl: “…He’s gonna… k-kill me…?”
Leisure Girl: “This is the first…time in my…life…I’ve been able to talk…to a human.If there is…such a thing as rebirth…I hope I won’t…be a monster…in my next life.”
Leisure Girl [indignant tone shift]: “Pfah, there goes another one. And that woodcutter looked so meaty. There would have been plenty to feed on there…”
it was good overall! maybe the latter half could of been a bit more disgrunteled. First thing I did notice though was the white noise of the background. Iam also not certain, but you maybe to close to the mic, so maybe turning down your gain may help. Best of luck!.
Thank you so much, I have been having trouble with my settings and figuring things out. Thank you for the feedback. I will work on that. I would be happy to resubmit something but I see the project is now closed. Let me know if you ever need anything. I am gonna go watch 100 youtube videos on this lol :)