The Curse of Aishavik
RyJurkowski for Kirik
Kirik - Male/Main Protagonist
Kirik (Key-rick), a stoic, rough and tumble man from Solari, who is the host of a troubling past. He was raised by outlaws, thieves, and even murderers, and the beginning of his life was difficult at best. Most of it was spent on the run, and in his early days he stole many things — both belongings and lives. This lifestyle diluted after meeting Bahari, and after they married and he became the father to two boys. Nowadays he lives the life of a fisherman, and instead of crime his passion now lies astride a beaten down boat, where he dreams of sailing the seas. His voice should be low and bassy, with this hint of youth thrown into the mix. His voice should warp into sounding extra warm when addressing and conversing with his family and friends.
- english
- male young adult
- male adult
"Me? Well, there's not much to tell. Orphan, raised by rouges and cutthroats. Y'know. A usual childhood."
"Psssh. He'll be fine, Bahari. That's how kids grow. They make mistakes, get hurt, maybe, and they learn. Let him have his fun, I say. Hell, that's how I grew up."
"Son of a-! No. No more bone puns. None. If I hear you say one more, well-? Well… *sigh.* Dammit, I dunno. Can we get 10 minutes of peace and quiet? Can you manage at least that? 10 small, measly minutes?"
The general voice is right where we want it, and yours specifically is, wow. Nice pipes, man. But the last line is honestly the most important for us. As yes, we need someone who can relay that general bassy and down to earth feel like you've done here, but we also need a VA who can completely flip that switch and get really energetic and hyped up at a moment's notice, and unfortunately... your performance here is more or less calm all the way through.
Thank you very much for the feedback! And yes I agree, it is calm all the way through. Would you like me to resubmit the last part with more variety?
Thanks!