The Curse of Aishavik
Wyatt James Martin for Solaris
Solaris - Male/Supporting Character
The god of the sun, sky, and stars, Solaris (So-lare-is) has skin like molten metal. He's stiff and solid like steel, and lets off heat hotter than magma, incinerating all that come too close to him. Apparently he was dutied to protect the world. As it stands, he lies dormant in an unknown location underneath the sands of the Solari Desert, and supposedly he has been like this for countless eons. Now the question is "how long will he stay like this?"
- english
- male adult
"...Okay-okay, pep talk time. Alright-alright, huff... We got this. I got this. Lit like a match, burn like a fire… I've beaten him once before, and that was simple enough, so I'll just… do it again. Yeah, no problem. Give him a good one-two and boom. K. Let's do this."
"The hottest fire meets the coldest ice, huh? Heh. We both know how this is gonna go snowman. Just like the last time, I'm gonna burn hot, and you're gonna melt."
"Really? You're really asking how hot my fire burns?! HAVE YOU EVER SEEN SOMEONE IGNITE ICE?!"
It's not horrible, but you've definitely gotta keep at it, and you can't be afraid to be loud, either. You've got a generally good voice, and if you speak more boisterously and more so through your diaphragm rather than the back of throat you can yield much clearer, much more attractive results. Oh, and working on your acting and emotional ranges can never hurt. In terms of both, at least here anyways, it sounds a little stiff.
Hey thanks for the feed back! like i said i am very new to this so any and all constructive criticism is very helpful