How Time Crisis 1 Should have Ended
Holoph for Sniper
Wild Dog pulls a surprise, two snipers who take out the hero with ease. The snipers are clueless as to why they didn't shoot the hero earlier.
“We had a better shot as he was running through the courtyard.”
“We were waiting for you to give the order, Sir.”
(screams as the tower they're in explodes)
Thank You and Feedback! Thanks for your audition! We have already found another voice for the role but we'd like to send feedback for insight and value for future auditions! -Mixing of Words, the first line had a good pace but some words were lost in the speech. IE "shot as he was" was hard to understand -Scream was hilarious but could have used more sudden seriousness Thanks again for your audition, best of luck in your future auditions!
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