Steven Universe: Gone Wrong Comic Dub
keltzy for Spinel
She was created 6,000 years prior to the events of the movie to comfort the lonely Pink Diamond who had lost her first Pearl to White Diamond. The two would play in Pink's garden until she was finally given a colony. At this point, Pink outgrew Spinel and abandoned her under the guise of playing a game by having Spinel stand-alone for thousands of years while Pink never returned. After discovering this through Steven's message to the universe, she went to Earth with full intent to destroy all organic life forms as a way of getting revenge.
I-is he ok? (Act very Nervous and Unsure)
WHY?!?! I said I was SORRY! This is all your Fault Anyway! You left ME behind for THIS ROCK! (Act Sad and Angry at the same time, like you have been betrayed.)
Oh Did I strike a wee bit of a nerve? I wouldn't push it too much Steven. Especially after what I JUST DID to your gem! But if you insist, then I'll finish what I started and SETTLE this ONCE AND FOR ALL! (You already know, the crazy psychotic Spinel we all know!)
I like the voice! Though I feel like you're holding back. But regardless of that, it is a great audition!
Thank you for the feedback!
No problem! If I find something that I have thoughts on then I like to make those thoughts known. Though typically if it involves a person I tend to ask before I make those thoughts known, but since you made an audition I figured you wouldn't mind a bit of constructive criticism. I mainly found that instead of going all-in some lines I felt like you held yourself back, though that was just how I saw it. But again it was not bad by any standard and is still great!
Actually, as I relisten to it, maybe it was my speakers acting funky cause the parts I found to be odd sound much better. So maybe my ears are bad or something. Again excellent work.