Unchanging Love (MLPFiM fanfic adaptation)
SunsetRuby for Orange Mint
Orange Mint is the disguise previously used by Firefly before she met Fine Roast. When Firefly feels her cover has been blown later in the story, she revives her old disguise and runs away for the night, before realizing she has to return to the cafe/home one last time to try to retrieve her love crystals without Fine Roast knowing. Orange Mint is a role of Firefly (Sweet Leaf), and so despite her small part in the story, she has to carry a lot of emotional weight until Firefly undisguises. Orange Mint has 22 lines.
[talking to herself, thinking about the love crystals she left under a floorboard in the bedroom closet] Stupid, complacent mare. I knew I should have kept them somewhere else. A bank deposit box, even.
[stammering after being caught in Fine Roast's bedroom] Oh, um, I-I'm sorry. I was looking for the restroom and I...
[Fine Roast has discovered her, but she hasn't undisguised yet; she refers to the love crystals she can't find] This is a trap, isn't it? You want me to go on a wild chase to try to find them and then they'll come in and- [skip ahead a few lines to where Fine Roast has asked her to show her real form...] What about the shop downstairs? I can't risk being found out by anypony else. I can barely believe I'm having this conversation with you.
It sounds like you said "complacement" at the beginning. The word is "complacent." (Come-PLAY-sent) Additionally, I think your audio quality could be improved.
ohh Kk i might just redo just in case, and i'm not sure whats wrong with the audio quality bec i was using a condenser mic
It's probably not the mic. I'm not an expert, but you might try getting closer to your mic, or raising its recording volume (usually done in your recording software, such as Audacity). Maybe the room you're in isn't silent enough? I just detect a lot of white noise. Check out Dee Bradley Baker's website about voice acting for some more tips: https://iwanttobeavoiceactor.com/
actually some of the things u said might be correct TvT
No need to despair! You're still on your learning journey to becoming a voice actor. In addition to https://iwanttobeavoiceactor.com/ I would also suggest watching video such as this one that talk about individuals' paths to becoming voice actors: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24Z8-88suVk
oohh ty ^^
i already redid my audition UwU and auditioned for Sweet Leaf too