The Dragon Tutor Comic Dub Ep. 2
BillyBobthe50th for Zephyr
Zephyr is a bit of a mystery. He's very caring and came to love quiver and care for him. He's very witty and intelligent with just a hint of sarcasm/attitude. He should sound like a middle aged professor with a youngish feel to him. Someone who, though he's not young himself, has a youthful quality to his sounds. His accent should be present but not overbearing. Slight accent. Radyr is pronounced like: ray-deer.
Calm/Happy
Zephyr: Greetings young Prince! Majesties!
Zephyr: So I see King Peppertop, If you think it's for the best!
Zephyr: Peregrin Radyr, have you found a problem already?
Witty/Sarcastic
Zephyr: Uh.. Yes! Thank you for bringing all of that up again!
Zephyr: Yes, but so are Leviathans and as you are the first on I have ever met... We'll just have to see what happens!
Zephyr: However, I do feel sorry for poor Quiver!
Mad
Zephyr: What is going on?!
Zephyr: You.. Get out... NOW!
Zephyr: We've done no such thing!
I like this audition, however a few things. You speak very quickly and Zephyr is more relaxed than that. It also seems like you are holding back when Zephyr should be expressive. Lastly, he is not elderly he is middle-aged with a youthful air. Thank you.
Thanks for the feedback, I'll try again with the advice.