Swimming Lessons for a Mermaid (Webtoon Dub, Episode 1 ONLY)(CLOSED)
SaintSGA for Soo Lee
Soo Lee is one of the leads of the entire comic and an excitable and sweet, albeit loud young man. He is a competitive swimmer and takes an interest in Choa. He discovers she is a mermaid in the finale of the first episode and later offers to help her learn to swim. I am looking for an expressive mid-low voice.
(overexcited)
I feel great. I'll do better this time!
(Pleading, getting scolded by his swim instructor)
ARGH!!! I'll do my best, sir!!
(Speaking to Choa, excited, charismatic)
I saw you at the pool! You were watching the game in the front row! Wearing these clothes with this bag!
(yelling, shocked)
Argh! That's the deep end! Choa, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to scare you!
(Noises Soo makes while swimming, please see the comic I've linked in the description for a better idea of what I'm looking for)
(Gasp) (Huff) (Gasp x3)
Your voice is a good match for the character, but you were lacking the energy needed to portray him, especially in the line where is apologizing to Choa for scaring her. I would also try and slow down just a little bit.