Swimming Lessons for a Mermaid (Webtoon Dub, Episode 1 ONLY)(CLOSED)
sdelaplain for Swim Team Instructor
An older man, with a stern and deep voice. He is a minor role in the beginning that speaks to Soo Lee after his match. I am looking for a fatherly and somewhat tired voice for this one.
(Speaking to Soo Lee after his match, stern and disappointed)
Your training records are good, but your meet records are disappointing. You didn't even rank this time. I'm sorry.
Phew...you must be more disappointed than I am. Let's do better in the next meet. But...now's the time to train even harder and quit being sloppy!!! Look at what happened when you were overconfident.
(stern, scolding, threatening)
If you slack off training one more time, I'll make you clean the swimming pool!!
Hi there! Welcome to voice acting and thanks again for auditioning! Your voice matches exactly what I would imagine the coach sounding like. I would recommend speaking a bit louder or boosting the dB levels, since this audition was very quiet. It's pretty easily fixable in post-production though, so it's really not a problem for me. As for emotion in the lines, I would get a bit louder in terms of your tone since the coach is nearly yelling at Soo. Really try and bring out that consescending/patronizing tone in line 3, don't be afraid to go a bit over the top for that line. I think this is a great start and I'm very impressed at the audition considering how new you are. Hopefully my feedback made sense, but if you need any clarification or extra tips, don't be afraid to reach out!
Thank you so much for the feedback! It’s incredibly helpful and I’d love to give it another couple takes with your advice and resubmit if that’s ok.
Go for it!