Demon Slayer Abridged
Aivi for Hand Demon
The Hand Demon will be portrayed as a really nice person, open to hear ANY kind of voice for him/her, the only requirment being the character must sound nice and genuine, and sound like a demon.
(agressive) Hey you! I won't let you get away, not without me - (sudden mood change to nice, more casual demon voice with no aggression) telling you to have an awesome time and good luck!
(monologing, sad tone) Yeah, it's a sad story really, but the reason i'm like this is because... well, before I was a demon, I use to play World of Warcraft.
(scared, apologetic) Wait! No, I-i'm sorry, I really apprechiate Everquest, I think it really change the world of gaming fore- *head is chopped off*
Honestly the difference between your normal voice and the character you were trying to create are so different, it doesn't even seem like the same person. That /can/ be an amazing thing, but when doing other voices, I would really try to keep that same diction used in your slate. It legitimately sounds like you're holding onto your tongue in the audition and not only does that make it really difficult to understand, but makes it difficult for you as an actor, to portray the emotions you'd like to be giving this character. Best of luck. Keep up the hard work.
Thank you very much for the detailed critique. This is very helpful.