Dio and Giorno Go to McDonald's But it's in Lego and Chaos Ensues
TheSSGCorrin for Cashier #1
The cashier working at this McDonald's is a cheerful fellow. He loves his job despite the low pay, and is always in control of things. If he had to use deadly force to maintain order in the restaurant, he would, because that's what a good employee does. His voice should be medium to u, alrbut either way, most of his lines are going to get high because of how cheerful he naturally is. He always sounds like he believes what he's saying with 100% confidence, even if what he's saying is utter bullocks.
(Cheerful)
"Alright! One Flurry coming right up!"
(Polite)
"So, you want the pickles ON the bun opposed to on the patty?"
(In Charge Sounding)
"Alright, if everyone could beat each other up in an orderly manner. I'd appreciate-."
I'd say for feedback, put more energy into the lines. Especially the first one. This guy loves his job. He should sound almost over the top excited. That's about it, really.
I'd be happy to do a second take if you'd like. I wasn't sure how much energy to give him without sounding forced