1. Try to work on your inflection. In your first line, all three reads had something wrong with the which words you chose to be the important ones. The most noticeable was the last read of that first line, where you stressed “for” instead of “sure.” 2. Your emotion is all one note. This isn’t really your fault, as the casting directions don’t include the main emotion the second line should have. However, with this aside, the emotion used throughout sounds like nothing fazes the character, which isn’t the case. In the manga, Juno is angry that Haru, the rabbit, was able to seduce the main character instead of herself. she’s talking to herself in this situation, and is practically livid that this bunny could take away her man. 3. You’re very quiet. In the final line, she’s announcing to the school in a public event, but the volume makes it sound like she’s just talking to some friends. Also, I haven’t listened to your second, deeper audition yet, but I feel the higher pitched one could suit the character very well if you listen to the tips I’ve given you.