Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
TOMMYJLXD for Stranger
Deadline: None
In my own opinion, one of the most important roles (there's two to increase number of retries you can submit). This role is to gather extra voices either for pivotal characters that appear later on or for character that will only appear once, or a few times, in the animation. On the odd occasion, I may decide that you'd be fit for a bigger role and will discuss this with you. This will include: normal citizens, family members, criminals, police officers, members of street gangs such as The Spades, The Diamonds, The Hearts, The Clubs and victims of Angel.
Feel free to vary on tone and wording, and even make up some lines of your of yours own, especially some that can be used for said roles. I'm interested to hear what you've got!
Informative, slightly defeated
"We've analysed the notes right down to the ink, sir. Nothing."
Commanding
"Stop where you are!"
Mocking
[Laughs evilly] "The fact that you think you can beat me is laughable, truly."
Monologue
I know, I know. I'm not meant to be here, and you told me to leave. But, like, you're...you're it! You're the vigilante that everyone's talking about! Aren't you? You have no idea how excited I am! Lemme just grab my camera and-...oh. Where did she go...?
Salutations to you too! First things first, your emotive tones are good, keep practicing those just to polish them up. Secondly, I'm not sure exactly how close to the microphone you were, but some of your audio was clipping for me and there were a few breaths (which is hard to edit out but easy to solve by stepping back a little). Oh, and it sounded like you got stuck on a line somewhere, so another piece of advice is to have several takes and go over lines until you're confident with them (this will also help with your emotive tones). Lastly, thank you for the audition!
Thank you for the advice I'll be sure to do better next time around