Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
Jess McDonald for Stranger
Deadline: None
In my own opinion, one of the most important roles (there's two to increase number of retries you can submit). This role is to gather extra voices either for pivotal characters that appear later on or for character that will only appear once, or a few times, in the animation. On the odd occasion, I may decide that you'd be fit for a bigger role and will discuss this with you. This will include: normal citizens, family members, criminals, police officers, members of street gangs such as The Spades, The Diamonds, The Hearts, The Clubs and victims of Angel.
Feel free to vary on accent, tone and wording, and even make up some lines of your of yours own, especially some that can be used for said roles. I'm interested to hear what you've got!
Concerned
"You look lost, want a ride?"
"I'm...I don't know what to say. I didn't think he was capable of doing this..."
Dismissive
"A vigilante? In this boring town?"
"You're about as reliable as a penguin that can fly."
Relieved
"I'm so glad you could make it! We really need your help."
"You have no idea how glad I am to see you! Now, help me beat some sense into those Diamonds."
Although the emotive tones are there, the pacing is slower than what I'd like, which takes away how natural your audition sounds. It's suitable for some lines, like the first, I think that one came out the best. The very last line however seemed a tad robotic. I think practice would help resolve this more than anything, maybe looking at how other people voice their lines too. Good luck, and thank you for your time!
Thank you for the feedback. Definitely something I'll consider in the future. :)