Izuku VS. Todoroki
Onyx Volcan for Inko Midoriya
This is only a small role for the Deku VS. Todoroki Fight however I plan to do a fandub of the entire series as it comes out. So if you do a good enough job this could be a long-term thing. (Unpaid cause of copyright issues but still)
(Over dramatically crying) Oh my baby Izuku!
Don't Sass your mother, I'm glad you got yourself a Quirk and everything but did it have to be so dangerous.
Izuku, my baby thank god your alright, you have got to stop doing this to me baby, my heart can't take another scare like this please!
The only real issue I have with this is for the last line your being overly dramatic like in the 1st line the, the 1st li e is supposed to be overly.dramatic but the last line is supposed to be an emotional scene so being overly dramatic is a hinderance feel free.to try again though
Oh, I'm sorry! Thank you for the information! I'll have a corrected version up by the end of the day, if you don't mind my doing so. Thank you again for correcting me!