Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
Shaz for Hound a.k.a. Jade
Deadline: 7th November 2019
Voice/Language: Mature, little to no slang; no cussing but may use the odd blasphemous word or two; a slightly lower pitch; slight British accent is preferred but not mandatory (if you do try the accent, please also record your voice without it for comparison, unless it's natural)
History/relationships: Support of the Rifa Rangers, er- Game changers (rebranded)
Personality: The motherly figure of the group. The member with the most capability to be responsible, organised and careful, making sure the team doesn’t go overboard. She's got a good pair of ears on her and able to give advice when you need it. Is often seen getting along with KC
Feel free to vary the tone and wording, I'm interested to hear what you've got!
Cheery
[Laughs] "Sorry Reaper, looks like the name's staying. Rifa Rangers sounds too catchy to give up."
Doting over a dog
"You're just such a good boy, aren't you? Yes you are."
Scolding, stern
"This was the last straw. Imagine what could have happened if people were there? And the costs for damages is going to shoot through the roof!"
Worried, scared
"I can hear them...their voices won't leave me alone. I don't know how I'm going to sleep like this..."
Monologue; informative, stern but cheery in some places
"You must be our next client! My name's Hound, it's lovely to meet you! Reaper? Not here yet, she tends to be late...a lot." [chuckles nervously] "Please do take a seat though. Could you sign this while we wait? It's a non-disclosure agreement, I'm sure you know why we need this. Yes well, if you know what's good for you, then you certainly don't want us knocking at your doorstep." [pause] "Thank you for your cooperation! I'll go grab some cookies for you, I made them myself!"
Your pacing was alright for the most part, but what was really lacking was the emotive tones in your audition, the confidence in your voice isn't very apparent, and this character isn't at all timid. It was a good effort though, and you placed your emphases well, thank you for the audition!
Thank you for the feedback. I'm quite new to voice acting and will take this on board. I have also recorded an audition for one of the Stranger roles, so hopefully you can hear my range! ^_^