Sonic the Hedgehog (IDW) Volume 1: Fallout! Comic Dub
Ajd2000 for Neo Metal Sonic
Neo Metal Sonic is the Mastermind behind the Badniks recent attacks. In this volume, his role is very small, shown only watching the events unfold with very few lines.
His voice should give off a mystery as we don’t learn his identity until Volume 2. He’s also technically in Eggman form during this volume, so I’m looking for a menacing sound that COULD be Dr. Eggman, but not able to tell.
So...he survived the first trial. Unsurprising. Deploy a battalion to the next nearest town. He’ll be drawn to it like a moth to a flame. Make sure word of Sonic’s latest success reaches the resistance. I want to crush BOTH hedgehogs in one strike.
So...Knuckles is still playing hero on the surface. That means Angel Island is unguarded. The Master Emerald is prone. That will accelerate my plans CONSIDERABLY…
Feedback: The softer tone does help with the mystery about who this character is, and the pacing works really well. The one thing to note was that I did hear your computer humming in the background, and that does distract from the performance itself.
Thank you for the feedback, when i get the time I'll give you an updated version minus the humming. Stay tuned.