When I listened to this I was like: "Damn, this dude's got some experience." You have a very solid recording where the audio was crystal clear, the deliver was strong and you can definitely feel the emotes. I even went to check your profile and you have provided an excellent demo reel that demonstrates your vocal range. Very good stuff! The only thing that didn't hit the mark was - the inflection. This portrayal sounded like that broken hero who is going fight for his life for a personal cause! (I'm thinking of a swordsman looking for revenge for some reason! XD). It needed to sound a little more weaselly, but one that has bite. :D Thank you kindly for auditioning Arbok_X, I wish you all the best on your long path of self-development towards a future in voice acting. As a matter of fact, I'll keep note of your profile in case I can match something for ya in future - the anime trailer has showcased the main characters but there are still characters not mentioned that were in the book in whom I believe will make an appearance early on! *thumbs up*