Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
atomisthebomb for Angel
Deadline: 7th November 2019
Voice/Language: Casual, maniacal, playful, with some slang; cusses sometimes; slightly deep voice; British accent is optional (if you do try the accent, please also record your voice without it for comparison, unless it’s natural)
History/relationships: Foe to the Game Changers and The Spades
Personality: A very cheery person. Well. When he’s causing trouble. Has a twisted sense of humour and dutifulness, and although he can be childish, his cunning, knowledgeableness and maturity say otherwise. Not much is known about him, other than the fact that he seems to be able to control people somehow.
Due to the nature of this character, I will more than likely be casting 2 voices for him, though this isn't set in stone.
Evil, playful
[Maniac laughing] "I'm so glad you could join me on my little stage! Let's have some fun, shall we?"
Cunning, said in a low voice
"If you thought I was capable of very little...well, you're very much mistaken. But no need to take my word for it. Just watch and see."
Slight irritation, then mocking/playfulness
"Had I known you'd be such a stubborn pest, I wouldn't have gone so easy." [chuckles and claps] "Well done, though, sweetheart! I applaud you."
Casual tone, wonder
"I wonder why she's so persistent. There's nothing in it for her. Though I suppose once a fool is always a fool."
Monologue; sounds psychotic, righteous, mocking
"Who am I?" [laughs] "Why, I'm the very reason you're here! I am Angel, God's messenger, here to grant you redemption. All you need is to do what I say, and your trip to heaven is certainly guaranteed. Wouldn't you like that? Yes, of course you would. Then what are you waiting for? Go, simpleton, wreak havoc, and let little Reaper know I sent you~"
The reverb and laugh at the end was a nice touch, well done! The pitch from your voice when you laugh is a tad too high and the breaths after them are a little louder than I would have liked since it makes you sound exhausted, but overall, you had a nice pace and the emotion you put behind the lines indeed made you sound manic. I appreciate the audition, thank you!
Thank you for taking the time to listen! I genuinely appreciate the critique and will reflect upon the imperfections.
Sure thing! If you don't mind, could you put forward an audition for Locus a.k.a. Vincent? I'd like to see if your voice would fit the role, I feel like it has the potential to. Again, only if you don't mind, haha.