Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney − Justice for All (fan dub)
Zenjoy for Bellboy
A hotel bellboy who is way too eager to be involved in the dire events surrounding the case in which he is involved.
The bellboy can have a "posh" English accent or he can have none- it doesn't really matter that much to me; I just want someone who can capture his "eager to please" and "enjoying this way too much" vibes.
"Good afternoon, sir!"
"Ah, I beg your pardon, sir! I am the bellboy of this establishment, at your service, sir."
"Yes! Our reputation will swell as the hotel where the murderer used a wiretap! We can charge a premium for the room, of course. It will be great for business, sir! I, too, will become famous! "The Bellboy who brought the murderer ice coffee"...!"
"Ah, yes... He struck me as a real "Lady Killer," if you'll pardon the expression. I knew it from the moment I saw him, sir. He and I are of the same ilk. We both carry the scent of... danger."
You weren't wrong: you bring a really good and surprisingly natural delivery to this role. Some of the choices you made for verbal emphasis and embellishment were pretty good, however there were a few spots where you might've tried a different emphasis in your delivery ("the hotel where the murderer used a wire-tap" jumps out as being one that I would've changed). That aside: quality read, well done.