Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
Fby02 for Raijun Saif Al-Fuwad
Deadline: 7th November 2019
Voice/Language: Casual, very little slang; deep and neutral or monotone voice, but be careful not to make him sound bored or fatigued; no (heavy) accent
History/relationships: Used to be close to Reaper but has distance himself from her; friend and leader to Alvah as King of Spades. A character of Eastern origin.
Personality: A cold character, due to his parents having passed away, all his emotions slowly got worn down into nothingness. On the off chance he does show emotion, it's of the negative variety. Doesn’t enjoy dealing with Reaper and her antics all the time in addition to his current responsibilities
Feel free to experiment with the wording and tones of the lines, I'd be interested to hear what you've got!
Annoyed, dismissive
"Are you done? I have better things to do than deal with a charity case."
Dismissive, defensive
"We're not related. She's not my sister."
Impatient, aggressive
"Give me one good reason why I should help."
Concerned, but trying to hide it
"I wish you would just...do what you're told.
Monologue; monotone voice, slight irritation in some parts
"Hm? What do you want? Rai, King of Spades, what's it to you? If you want Reaper, she's not here. Probably on some errand she calls a mission. I imagine she'll be a while so come back later. Is there a reason you're asking about me? For all I know you're an undercover officer. Get lost, I don't have time for this."
As with Alvah, the accent you have wouldn't fit this character. Additionally, your pacing here was quite off, but it was much better in your audition for Alvah. Again, thank you for the audition and good luck with voice acting!
Thanks for the feedback! And yeah I've been trying hard to get rid of my accent. Kinda annoys me myself...
Actually, your accent is quite pleasant to listen to. Rai is of Eastern origin which is why it wouldn't fit. You're free to submit an audition for the role of Stranger because I do feel as if you have potential as a voice actor and would love to work around the accent for another character. Only if you want, of course, haha.
Alrighty I'm on it! c: