The Caverns: A Destiny 2 Machinima Short
Ethanr1222 for Stefan
Stefan, is a brash, exuberant, and explosive personality. He is a close friend to Phineas, though, he doesn't quite understand his constant visions. He can be naive at times, but he wishes the best for his friend.
**His voice is meant to be strong and slightly egotistical (20s-30s). Think squad leader type.**
(excited, but nervous) "Tanner! I think I found the spot Rattis was talking about--at least I think so. Come have a look...it's freaking me out."
"Tanner, what the hell? Did you dose off again?"
(calm and hushed tone) "Be careful Tanner. I don't want to lose you..."
Good work. I dig the loud suddenness (think that's a word!) of the the opening line. Maybe a slight less inflection and more quiet on the final. Overall nice work! Cheers.
Would you like me to redo it?
Sure! I like this one, but let's do another for safe keeping.
Ok. I will after class today. Lol