The Caverns: A Destiny 2 Machinima Short
Justin Nelson for Phineas Tanner
Phineas, is a talented, but reserved young man. A gifted pilot, but he has been plagued by visions of cosmic beings haunting him for years. This mission proved to be too much as his visions began seeping into reality.
**His voice is meant to be youthful, yet wise (20s-30s). He often switches between anger, and a calm demeanor as he copes with his visions.**
(slightly angered and annoyed) Stefan, what the hell, you didn't hear my comms?
(sarcastic) You've been busy!
Stefan, I've got nothing down here. Just the slow drip of water. I'm...I'm coming back up.
Nice work. I feel it captures the youthful nature of him nicely. Maybe some slight adjustments along the lines of tone (quieter and stumbling like the last sentence.) Cheers.
Would you like me to give it a second try?
Yes, let's give it a shot.