WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
Holden for The Abomination
"Tortured and reclusive... this man is more dangerous than he seems."
A man beaten, and scarred by the cruelty of scientific pursuit, the Abomination holds a gnawing secret within his body. Now, he carries that horrible burden to the hamlet, where he seeks to find sanctity for his mind and body.
Having been the subject of inhumane experiments and horrifying torture, the abomination carries himself in a melancholic, somber mood that evokes either pity or self-deprecation. That is, until the beast comes out.
Voice: Medium - Medium Low; Wary - Insecure - Doubtful
Landing a Critical Hit - Bellowing Fury
I have clawed back my freedom from worse than you!
My curse feeds my rage!Becoming Hopeless - Depressed Terror
This burden dims my very soul.It feeds off of my essence, even now I falter...Becoming Stalwart - Unshaking Resolve
I can master it! We can master our fate!As long as I am free, I will fight!
Pitch could be a little lower, you certainly have the raspy voice for it but don't force the voice if it becomes an issue for you. Delivery is fine enough, the pacing is even and you do get most of the emotional peaks down; though you could use a bit more power in your final lines. Tone is there but you need a bit more emotional backing to sell these lines to me. I can see you understand what the appropriate tone is, but you need a bit more power behind your lines before I call this great.
Very detailed, thanks! I'll definitely take them under advisement.