WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
Alambkauthe for The Abomination
"Tortured and reclusive... this man is more dangerous than he seems."
A man beaten, and scarred by the cruelty of scientific pursuit, the Abomination holds a gnawing secret within his body. Now, he carries that horrible burden to the hamlet, where he seeks to find sanctity for his mind and body.
Having been the subject of inhumane experiments and horrifying torture, the abomination carries himself in a melancholic, somber mood that evokes either pity or self-deprecation. That is, until the beast comes out.
Voice: Medium - Medium Low; Wary - Insecure - Doubtful
Landing a Critical Hit - Bellowing Fury
I have clawed back my freedom from worse than you!
My curse feeds my rage!Becoming Hopeless - Depressed Terror
This burden dims my very soul.It feeds off of my essence, even now I falter...Becoming Stalwart - Unshaking Resolve
I can master it! We can master our fate!As long as I am free, I will fight!
Pitch matches the characters age well here, and the more throaty nature of your voice adds to the deliver of the lines. The delivery is well enough, as you do manage to hit the emotional peaks when necessary and make them sound natural with your chosen voice; though you could draw out your words a bit more on the second lines to make them sound a bit more depressed. The more gruff and grizzled tone hits a nice balance with the slightly slower delivery here, which works well enough for your audition and only really falters in the first half of the second line. This is the only part where I feel you need to have a more somber tone to your reading, as the intensity of the other lines work well enough with the character facet you've chosen here.
Awesome! Thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it! I'll be sure to keep an eye on this project.