WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
cleaned79214 for The Abomination
"Tortured and reclusive... this man is more dangerous than he seems."
A man beaten, and scarred by the cruelty of scientific pursuit, the Abomination holds a gnawing secret within his body. Now, he carries that horrible burden to the hamlet, where he seeks to find sanctity for his mind and body.
Having been the subject of inhumane experiments and horrifying torture, the abomination carries himself in a melancholic, somber mood that evokes either pity or self-deprecation. That is, until the beast comes out.
Voice: Medium - Medium Low; Wary - Insecure - Doubtful
Landing a Critical Hit - Bellowing Fury
I have clawed back my freedom from worse than you!
My curse feeds my rage!Becoming Hopeless - Depressed Terror
This burden dims my very soul.It feeds off of my essence, even now I falter...Becoming Stalwart - Unshaking Resolve
I can master it! We can master our fate!As long as I am free, I will fight!
I normally wouldn't go for a more guttural voice for this character, but given the pitch you're taking, it actually sounds quite natural. Emotional input here is well delivered throughout, and your pacing is well balanced here, only faltering to being too quick in the last line to sound natural. I like the more wounded and almost grief stricken tone you have here, as it works well with the more guttural and almost croaking voice you've chosen. Not many things to really complain about besides that final line reading that could be evened out, well done.
Thanks a lot! I saw you giving out feedback to other auditions for these characters and I was a little nervous about this coming hahaha! But yeah I agree, one of my biggest issues in general is pacing my line delivery. Thanks for the feedback!