WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
connormiranda97 for The Jester
"He'll be laughing still... At the end."
Life and death are an eternal performance to the Jester, a man that's taken the mantle of reaper and bard upon his garb. Having been driven almost insane by a now dead tyrant, the Jester arrives to the hamlet as a means of finding solace for his wounded mind.
The Jester is as close to unhinged as they come, detailing every one of his actions through snide remarks and a joking demeanor. Even when suffering from delirium or at death's door, he won't drop his act, either out of manic habit or as a defense mechanism.
Voice: Medium - Medium High; Light Hearted - Grimly Humorous - Sarcastic
Landing a Critical Hit - Morbid Amusement
AH-HA HA HAAAAA!Slice, slice, slice!Becoming Paranoid- Darkened Joke
Maybe just cut all their throats... To be sure.Let them stand behind me?! AH HA HA HAAAAA!Becoming Stalwart - Focused Lucidity
Madness or willpower. Either works.I care not. And so I am immortal.
Pitch here is fine, it matches the character well enough and provides a clear amount of support for your line delivery. The delivery itself is well paced, you're very quick here but the squeakier, joking tone you've got going actually compliments it well. The mischievous and murderous tone is a nice election for the type of crazy you're representing here, though I will say that you probably need a bit more volume to your laugh. Don't be afraid to draw out some of your lines as well, the fast past is good but there are parts like the laugh and the second lines where you could benefit from this.
I agree with you wholeheartedly, drawing out some of the laughs could have brought a bit more to the characterization I was going for. I'm noticing that the laughs made the lines fall a bit flatter now that you pointed it out, so that's something for me to watch for in the future. Thanks for the constructive criticism! Every bit helps!