WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
KisaPrime for The Plague Doctor
"What better laboratory than the blood-soaked battlefield?"
A woman of science, medicine, and toxicology, the Plague Doctor is both sides of her aforementioned name beneath a blackened robe. Once the student of a great surgeon and lecturer, she's come to the hamlet to both ply her trade and to experiment on the horrors beneath.
The Plague Doctor is a creepy woman, not because of her mask or satchel of diseased grenades, but rather her disturbingly curious interest in experimentation and dissection. She can still be trusted to heal as a doctor should, but her fixation on collecting 'samples' in battle makes everyone near her uneasy.
Voice: Medium - Medium High; Curious - Eerily Excited - Oddball
Landing a Critical Hit - Fascinated Excitement
Look how they wither and die!One more cadaver for the cart.Becoming Paranoia - Unfounded Distrust
This has all been a decoy to steal my formulas! Deny it!You will not have my secrets! NO YOU SHALL NOT!Becoming Stalwart - Scientific Certainty
The prospect of death does not frighten me!Even the will benefits from the immune response!
Pitch works well enough here, as it sounds appropriately young for the character and somewhat supports your tone. Your delivery however, is very inconsistent as you have the emotional back in the first half your audition yet completely fall flat afterwards. Tone is also inconsistent as you manage to give a good obsessed tone at the start but every other attempt at establishing your emotional input seems lacking. This is especially so in your final lines that sound robotic and not at all like a scientific assurance should be.
Sp need to work on emotion in just the last 2 lines?
And the second part of the second line. Both of those are unfortunately lacking in tone for the character, but if you're going to do it redo it, I need you to do all of the lines so they retain the same consistency.