WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
GHsiao for The Crusader
"A mighty sword arm anchored by holy purpose."
A fallen yet faithful warrior of light, the Crusader answers the call to the hamlet to do battle with, in his words, the 'One True Evil'. He is a master swordsman and a powerful bulwark of his god's vengeful retribution upon the dark.
The Crusader is zealous in his pursuit of what he believes is rightful justice against the darkness. For his, he holds himself as a beacon of hope for his group, holding both pride and passion; yet lives with the guilt over the atrocities he's committed under the name of god.
Voice: Medium Low - Low; Fervent - Prideful - Faithful
Landing a Critical Hit - Righteous Fervor
I banish thee!I judge thee guilty!Becoming Masochistic - Penant Acceptance
I'll not avert mine eyes. T'would offend my vows.The flesh doth test my will. It shall not break it!Becoming Courageous- Booming Zeal
I have sacrificed much... Now I shall claim all!Light be our vanguard!
Pitch could be slightly lower, you're selling me his age but not enough of his worn voice. Delivery has a good pace but you're lacking a bit in emoting with some of the declarations as they could sound much more zealous. Tone has the right emotion behind it with your powerful declarations, however it's a matter of quantity rather than quality for this. There needs to be much less restraint for the Crusader, he is not a holy paladin or righteous soldier but an ex-murderer that wishes to absolve himself of sin by doing more murder in the name of his god. Zeal is the key word here, you just need more of it and this audition will be serviceable.
Thank you for the feedback here and with all the other auditions. I'll certainly give the Crusader one more shot, but I'm afraid I probably can't match your expectations for the Leper. Regardless, I really do appreciate you taking the time to write such wonderful feedback.