WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
platinumpussycat for The Arbalest
"Shoot, bandage, and pillage: the dancing steps of war."
Runaway, soldier, and survivor are all marks that have come to define the Arbalest. Carrying and using her father's crossbow since the age of eight, she's refitted and honed her senses to even the most errant target and is trained in all types of ammunition from iron bolts to flares.
The Arbalest is on a mission to prove herself a successor to her deceased father, to an almost faulting degree. This results in a serious attitude that may be masking her own fears of failing to live up to his memory.
Voice: Medium; Serious - Glory-Hound - Stressed
Landing a Critical Hit - Victorious Excitement
Hell's fire I'm good!Bull's eye!Becoming Fearful - Weeping Terror
I can feel Death's sights on my heart!N-no! No more!Becoming Powerful - Striking Tenacity
Hah! My bolts know their eyes!I have sighted their weaknesses!
Pitch is unfortunately too low on this one, which may work against your tone as it may make the character sound a little too cocky for the slightly lower tone. That being said, your delivery is very well done here as your emoting is well founded within the lines you've given and there's no real issue with the actual voice besides the pitch. Tone is appropriate for the character, as you do get the fear and youthful pride down for her abilities. If your pitch was a bit higher, this would come off flawlessly as it reflects on the character's age.
Thank you! I'll let this one go for now, as I really struggle getting my voice to do much of anything in higher pitches, but if you'd like me to put in another audition and attempt something higher, just let me know.
I think this sounds great. It's pretty much how I imagined her to sound.
Thank you!