WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
The Loot Ninja for The Abomination
"Tortured and reclusive... this man is more dangerous than he seems."
A man beaten, and scarred by the cruelty of scientific pursuit, the Abomination holds a gnawing secret within his body. Now, he carries that horrible burden to the hamlet, where he seeks to find sanctity for his mind and body.
Having been the subject of inhumane experiments and horrifying torture, the abomination carries himself in a melancholic, somber mood that evokes either pity or self-deprecation. That is, until the beast comes out.
Voice: Medium - Medium Low; Wary - Insecure - Doubtful
Landing a Critical Hit - Bellowing Fury
I have clawed back my freedom from worse than you!
My curse feeds my rage!Becoming Hopeless - Depressed Terror
This burden dims my very soul.It feeds off of my essence, even now I falter...Becoming Stalwart - Unshaking Resolve
I can master it! We can master our fate!As long as I am free, I will fight!
Pitch is almost there, the raspy voice certainly works but I hope you're not straining yourself for a lower pitch. Delivery has a good pace, but your emoting doesn't vary enough with each line. Tone works well enough for the character, as it does have that grumbling, depressed feeling in it. However, it's not very dynamic as it feels like it's emoting the same tone throughout the lines instead of showing the different portions of the character's mind.
Would it be preferable to submit attempt 2 as a reply or a separate audition?