WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
Dreadfast for The Grave Robber
"To those with keen eye... Gold gleams like a dagger's point."
A daredevil with dagger and pick, the Grave robber leads a life of dangerous pursuit as a means of clawing her family's name out of the dirt. Once an affluent lady of the bourgeois, her family's ruined name and finances serve as a perfect catalyst for her unsavory practice.
The Grave Robber is a lady of action and quick wits as her attitude suggest an almost sardonic appraisal of the world around her. Out of all of the heroes she's the youngest, and the most prone to act cocky and even flirt with the others from time to time.
Voice: Medium - Medium High; Witty - Sardonic - Peppy
Landing a Critical Hit - Dark Smugness
Oh, did that sting?Think I'm done with you? HARDLY!Becoming Irrational - Inane Lunacy
Off with my head! A capital idea!There is a woman in my coat! Out, out, you vagabond!Becoming Powerful- Serious Intent
Enough lolly-gagging. Now I aim for the heart.A knife to the heart, t'other for the coinpurse.
Pitch is fine for this one, sounds more like a traditional lady with a lower tone which is good. Delivery is inconsistent here, as your emoting and pacing is quite good for the first and second line portions yet the final ones have strange inflections on your part. Tone is also strange for this one. You have the upbeat attitude down, and the smug nature of the character, however I don't hear the shift to that serious edge in the last lines. Also, if you're going to shout try to equalize your mic so it doesn't blow out like in the end of the first line.
I definitely see what you mean with the inflection/tone issues with the last part, I think I was being too indecisive with how I wanted to deliver it. Would it be alright with you if I tried re-recording those last couple of lines? I'm pretty inexperienced with shout lines so I'll look into what I can do to maintain the sound with them, thanks for the feedback!
If you're going to re-record it, you may as well attempt to do the whole audition over. I'll judge it accordingly, so please post the new one here whenever you're ready.
Thanks, is there anything in the earlier part (besides fixing the audio issue) that you'd like to hear differently?