WDT - Darkest Dungeon: Voices in the Dark - Voice Mod
Falmenara for The Crusader
"A mighty sword arm anchored by holy purpose."
A fallen yet faithful warrior of light, the Crusader answers the call to the hamlet to do battle with, in his words, the 'One True Evil'. He is a master swordsman and a powerful bulwark of his god's vengeful retribution upon the dark.
The Crusader is zealous in his pursuit of what he believes is rightful justice against the darkness. For his, he holds himself as a beacon of hope for his group, holding both pride and passion; yet lives with the guilt over the atrocities he's committed under the name of god.
Voice: Medium Low - Low; Fervent - Prideful - Faithful
Landing a Critical Hit - Righteous Fervor
I banish thee!I judge thee guilty!Becoming Masochistic - Penant Acceptance
I'll not avert mine eyes. T'would offend my vows.The flesh doth test my will. It shall not break it!Becoming Courageous- Booming Zeal
I have sacrificed much... Now I shall claim all!Light be our vanguard!
Your voice fits this one quite well, as the pitch is spot on with the character's. Delivery has a good amount of emoting, but it's unfortunately not enough to convey the true zeal of this character. Tone is almost there, you have the intent and prideful demeanor with you, but you need less restraint. This is a warrior of faith, a zealous ex-knight that should be proclaiming his statements and you're only halfway there with your current delivery.
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