Class B Week 9 Homework Submission
LOCorticotropic for Weird Rare Race
Monologue : With Subdivision added to your growing list of voice acting techniques to think about. it may be starting to become difficult to keep everything in mind when you voice. The R and W is one of the most difficult consonants, especially for people who's English is not their primary language. Proper use of subdivision and pacing will make this script much easier to read but, remember to always prioritize the basics of proper breathing, projection, and enunciation above all else.
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Excellent job! I got lost in the story you put on! If I had to say any constructive criticism, it would be to find better pacing/find a place to breath. I think the second to last paragraph you ran out of steam near the end of the sentence. Amazing work overall!