Persona 5: The Series - Unofficial Dub
Victoria Stam for Makoto Niijima
Makoto is the no-nonsense, smart as hell, resident tactician of the group within the series. She mainly fills the role of the group's mother, bringing a stern yet kind voice of reason to discussions. She has a strong sense of moral justice and whilst confident academically she mainly wishes to understand others and experience real friendship.
Her voice is a mainly mid-low range. She is often serious but occasionally can get flustered when caught off guard socially. However she can be an intimidating presence when required. Keep this in mind when voicing her.
You can look at the game's dub actress, Cherami Leigh, for reference.
(Makoto does not appear prominently until later in the series.)
An Ambush!
I'd like to go somewhere I've never been before. How about the arcade? (Asking Ren to help her experience new things.)
Although you didn't ask for feedback I felt I needed to say. Your take on the second line is really quite good. Your first line however, it feels like you got the tone but you didn't quite get the voice. I'd love for you to try again and just attempt the first line with the same voice as the second just with a surprised tone. Good work though.
If you truly want me to try the first line again, I'd be more than willing to. If you end up liking it enough, I give my consent on being picked despite the earlier claim I made in the initial audition.
Please submit an updated first line. I really think you have the potential here. Only if you're still interested of course.