Class B Week 8 Homework Submission
fahmad27 for Charlie's Charming Chocolate Factory
Monologue: Be careful not to focus entirely on the acting side and forget the techniques that you've been practicing for the first half of this course. The first breath you take and the posture you are starting the read with will greatly influence how you start off. If you are the type who are slow to get engaged into your read, this could be the reason. Lastly, and most importantly, remember to always be having fun with your reads.
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This script was a hard one. I'd say work on breaking up your sentences. It sounded very much like you were reading a script. Wish I had your diction though! Was spot on.
Your enunciation only has issues on specific syllables. The most difficult for you seem to be the "i" (yee) sound, especially when paired with an N such as the -ing's. There is a bit of a lisp on your S's as well but it is much softer. You can voice more confidently on the other sounds because you don't have issues on them. Focus your practicing on the specific consonants you have trouble with rather than just reading. For instance, try repeating phrases like, "Ring Rung Rang, Long Lung Ling."