Week 4 Class B Homework Submission
MoonSword1994 for Freaky Freddie
Monologue Freaky Friday: Great job last week on projection. Most of you are getting a great grasp on this.Nice to hear the natural emotions coming out of you as you still focus on articulating and watching those unwanted sounds that can come out in each of these consonants’. Please remember to continue to project, imagining that you are on a stage without a mic and that you need to ensure even the people in the back rows can hear you.
This week, I would like everyone to continue to focus on their posture and breathing when reading. Ensure you are taking big diaphragmatic breaths every time.
Peer Review: Please provide at least 1 feedback to someone who has not received a feedback yet on the homework link. Reviewing feedback of others and providing feedback as well is a great way to learn. Pay attention to the critiques that I am offering as well as there can be lots to learn in there.
Have Fun!
Your enunciation is really good, but i feel like it took away from the emotion at the beginning of your read. When you started to feel more comfortable with the monologue towards the middle, I could hear the change in the way you read! Also, don't feel bad. I couldn't get though four full takes before doing the final monologue I posted!
Great projection, and very nice enunciation. I love that you are putting so much emphasis on your enunciation and there is great energy in your read as well. If I was to nitpick, I would recommend for you to try to keep the same energy and enunciation but trying to get better flow in your delivery. I mentioned to someone else as well but, remember that you do not need to "ar.ti.cu.late," to articulate. Keep up the great work!