Wow that was really energetic, great pronunciation! My one thing would be some of the lines started to sound the same, so keep up that energy level, but make sure to tweek some words so the lines sound different!

Super fun! The energy and projection is great but you're peaking out, a bit of a tweak to your mic gain (down 10%) would help, then on mid voiced pieces move closer to mic, and pull back a bit on the loud stuff. GREAT energy and super fun!