Class B Week 1 Homework Submission
Trickster for Advertising Lullaby
Monologue - Advertising Lullaby (attached): Please focus on your projections while reading this script. Imagine that you are speaking to a gymnasium full of people and you don't have a mic. Remember to take nice deep breath to ensure you have enough air to get you through the paragraphs. Feel free to edit and play around with noise removal but please try to record everything in 1 take. You can try multiple times but the final recording should be uncut. This will help you with learning how to manage your air better and will apply to all future homework scripts.
Peer Review: Please provide at least 1 feedback to someone who has not received a feedback yet on the homework link. Seeing others' feedback and providing feedback yourself is a great way to learn as well.
Have fun!
You started strong but started to lean out toward the end, I could tell the long running paragraphs were giving you a bit of trouble. took quite a few breaths mid paragraph/sentence. Your tone was good overall though, I would def work on your breathing and breath control. The quality sounded a bit hollow too, a bed sheet hanging behind you can help that tremendously! Hope I'm not coming off as critical. I want to give as much review and feedback as I can to help a fellow classmate out. Keep practicing any breathing exercises they give us and I'm sure you'll be able to nail those long runs!